I think mainly my story followed the same order as the Daily Mail’s. The information that I chose to put up towards the top of my article was the same as the information the Daily Mail chose to start the story with.
The Daily Mail obviously went to greater lengths to get a more detailed article that included more in depth information and more quotes from the subject.
The angle of my story compared to the professional one was very similar as it was most importantly about a man’s struggle to get the surgery he wants so he no longer has to live in purgatory.
After more practice I think that I would be able to organise the story better and notice the relevant information more easily so that the structure of my articles can improve.